Friday, October 30, 2009

Creative Challenge #76 - Vast beyond Measure.

Love letter

Dear Money,

From behind my veil,
Your crisp, sinewy beauty
Makes my breath keel. 
Sparks of blatant desire
Deep within me swells
A need to possess you,
In all ways I could.
Do whatever it takes,
To Make you mine,
Exclusively mine. 
Owning you,
To do as I please. 
I'm lost, in my lust for you,
I know, that which was never mine,
Will never be mine to keep.
I should let you be,
So you will choose to come to me. 
Yet, my obsession for you,
Is Vast, beyond Measure. 
My love for you grows ever more,
You, Intoxicate Me.

Awaiting your positive response
Your Lover from afar, Me.

Creative Challenge #76

18 comments:

Jo B said...

Lololol, that is too cute. I love that last line "lover from afar"...I can relate.
I find it ironic, because I can tell from how and what you write money is not important to you. You value the intangible. Good use of sarcasm...um, hope I did not read it wrong.

Pat Angloswiss said...

LOL, such true words, it is not important to have, just much better

Kitty Konnection Purrrrfect said...

I am impressed with your creativity in this piece.
I'm not at all certain if written with sarcasm and unimportance....I'm more interested in whether or not you get an answer back!! LOL

dp ♥ said...

...you did a great job expressing something I know you never feel! awesome writing

belita 747 said...

Did love your sarcastic write, assuming that my understanding is correct. Thanks for the visit. Have a nice weekend.

tracy marshall said...

LOL!!!! We create an entire universe in every moment and yet have so much trouble creating paper and coins ;))

Shail Mohan said...

Very very creative indeed Rashmi.

Karen . said...

I loved this,
Brilliant, whether you have or have not

http://karenisme.multiply.com/journal/item/210/Creative_Challenge_76

Debby Rosenberg said...

LOL...that aught to wake up your laws of attraction :)

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Oh LOL, yes it would. It will be shocked into waking up.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you Karen, Shailji. :)

@ Tracy : I have often wondered about that, why is it so difficult to manifest Money especially when manifesting not having it comes easy? *giggling*

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Yes, you did understand correctly. I tried not to feel sarcastic but it did show through.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Aww Danette, thank you.. I am quiet transparent, arent I?

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Callie, I have been waiting for mail...except for an email from my Long Lost Nigerian Relatives with Huge Funds to transfer to my account, I havent seen Crispness yet. :P.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Pat, I agree, its better to have, since it is a necessity...But I see some for who this becomes the Be All and End All of life, scares me to think like that.

Inez Tan said...

Haha funny one! And to think I keep getting mails everyday telling me I have won a million pounds (and I don't even stay anywhere in Europe). Ahh, if only the mails were true..

Mysty Fairy~dragons said...

we need money in this world even if we don't admit to it:)

Groovy Grotto Rose's Place said...

hahahaha, goodone. Yup, I think we are all lovers from afar where money is concerned these days, LOL