Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Aching in Hurt

In this Love of mine,
I cant figure when the -

misery began
 lacking began
   not seeing set in
   listening became deaf
   and the  blinds in your eyes, met mine.
 
What day was it,
When our Egos started wanting to -
 be right
 be the good one
 blame the other
  and negate our invested time and emotion.

Where was that moment
When our needs were
  Stifled, screaming to come out
 Yet the mouth refusing
 To open and ask,

For Fear of - 
 Rejection
 Hearing voices of defeat
 Feeling love die.

Yet in all of this hurt, pain and ache,
I hold on to that what I loved in You.

9 comments:

Tarra Diddle said...

Beautiful...

Leveret 333 said...

Ouch !

Rose Blanco said...

Wow, this is tremendous.

Duchess Ronnie said...

Rashmi this is beautiful but painful as well. I feel for you and so understand.

Teeny Weeny Tiger said...

Wow. Painful. Egos can destroy love, even true love. It can all become a nightmare... it did for me.

harleen gandhi said...

beautiful but i can feel the pain...

Susan H said...

Its the problem in relationships and is so normal, the poem expresses it well and why there remains togetherness despite everything

dp ♥ said...

poignant emotions on the surface AND deep inside...well scribe sorrow
(((hugs)))

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you :).