With toes that look like peas in a pod
Your little fingers holding strong
Eyes of Innocence dreaming dreams
Your wholeness of being, Glows
Your tiny-ness exudes -
Promises of a better tomorrow
Excellence, brought through intentions
Adoration, for all that IS
Celebration, of Life
Existence in its Perfection.
You my little one are an embodiment of PEACE.
21 comments:
great work. I love it!
Beautiful.....Wholeness divine...
Brilliant poem - Explaining the meaning of Peace through the Baby. Thank you. Mine is at -http://jayaramanms.multiply.com/journal/item/232.
Wonderful Rashmi. Love the way the last stanza formed the words of peace. Very clever.
Reminds me of something I told my grandson yesterday ... "We arrive here whole .. and life erases us..Our challenge is to redraw our new Self when awareness opens the doors to enough light to "see" how.
nothing like a baby to inspire thoughts of a better tomorrow.
http://vickiecollins.multiply.com/journal/item/402/picture_to_words_Faces_3...hate
nice....very nice...........................
Lovely!
such a lovely piece, rashmi! embodiment of all superlatives...",)
http://rowe85.multiply.com/journal/item/60/FACES_All_Through_The_Night_Peace
Beautiful Rashmi. I agree with you..
Good one rashmi.....
I only just saw this one - beautiful - toes that look like peas in a pod - what a wonderful comparison.
Just lovely!!!
love the acrostic...haven't seen that in a long while...wonderfully written.
"Promises of a better tomorrow"
Isn't this what it is all about? How perfect that you would use this wording with the word 'peace' being your directive. Absolutely perfect, Rashmi. I enjoyed your piece very much.
Pinkie
Welcome to my page.. Glad you enjoyed it.. Its fun doing the acrostic 'cause it means racking the brain a little more than necessary :)
Thank you Pat. :)
Thank you for hosting it, its an enjoyable exercise in writing. :) Glad you enjoyed it :)
Thank you Kannan, Long time no see, how are you doing?
@Milli, Jackie, Claudia,Ronnie, Ifiik and loveangel : Thank you. Its always a pleasure to have you here.
@ Jaya and Vickie : thank you for the compliments..
fine contribution i have participated reshmi
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