Thursday, July 3, 2008

Obsession

The light that shines on you
In your blinded hour
The breeze that cools you
On the hottest day
The firmest rock
In your moment of weakness
The comfortable shoulder
That soaks your tears
The person
who makes you smile
The one who warms you
On the coldest night
The chest that holds
The Jewel that you are
Your preciousness
Makes me breathe
So I may Be by your side
Being Obsessed by you
Is my only Obsession.

10 comments:

shankarg ♥2♥ said...

blessings! the true role of a true spouse!

Shail Mohan said...

"Being Obsessed by you
Is my only Obsession."
Lovely lines!!

Milli Musings said...

Very interesting and I agree with the other comments below.
"Being Obsessed by you
Is my only Obsession."

Giles Y Owen said...

Woo Hoo! Passion, Rashmi. That is really intense.

jo la ranita said...

this is a very nice poem...it is strange...until i read ''being obsessed by you'' I was thinking about my father

Tina Burton said...

"Being Obsessed by you
Is my only Obsession."

That's what caught my eye too. :)

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Not weird cause to a degree it is what a parent does, which is why within an adult relationship, it makes it an obsession.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Shankarji, Shailji, Milli and Tina : thanks a ton.. I did want a word play that will make an impact and it seems to have worked.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

:) Giles : Had to get it off my chest, it was killing me.

Kannan G said...

Nice to note that the Gemini Contenders......also contend on Obsession for one another.....