Thursday, March 18, 2010

Creative Challenge #93 - Where did the time go?

My Insatiable Search

I search high and low

For a time –

When children played on the streets,

And no parent worried for their safety.

When elders could correct or teach any child

And no one chastised them.

When Right was recognized as such

Even though we didn’t speak the other’s language.

When Respect was something everyone already had

Not something that had to be earned.

When Religion was a way of life,

Not something traded for Money and Power.

When spirituality was a norm,

Not something for our ego to build on

When People knew how to be Good neighbours

Productive citizens, Ethical employees, Benevolent employers

Lovingly Committed husbands and wives and Dutiful loving Children

Elders knew to wield their wisdom

Not manipulate it to satisfy their whim.

When Reputation, Honour and Integrity meant the world

And Righteousness didn’t involve killing or exiling

When compassion wrapped every thought, word and deed

Life was about living in Harmony

Surely the wheel of time hasn’t turned so far

Has it?

 

Creative challenge #93 Tour

12 comments:

Linda _ said...

Wow! I would like to think not.

Milli Musings said...

Well written Rashmi and deeply thought through. I am afraid to say I am with you. Where did the good life go?

dp ♥ said...

you know I don't know how you read my mind, but I was thinking some of these thoughts just yesterday!

this piece is just brilliant!

Vickie Collins said...

hmmm, I too think of things that used to be better, at least in my mind. Sometimes I wonder if I was just lucky to have been "reised right" cuz many of those behaving the most poorly (in my opinoin at least) are MY age.

http://vickiecollins.multiply.com/journal/item/998/Creative_Challenge_Where_did_the_time_go

Kitty Konnection Purrrrfect said...

could it be called" progress?"
must be....

absolutely astounding write!

IJ . said...

The whole poem is effective and these words seem both apropos to this time in history yet timeless.

tracy marshall said...

Was it ever like this anywhere, really?

Doctor ifiik Groper.... said...

I really like tis piece.... terr-ifiik.....

belita 747 said...

I really love this... Unfortunately, the wheel of time seems now standing still.
http://belita747.multiply.com/journal/item/933/CREATIVE_CHALLENGE_WHERE_DID_THE_TIME_GO

Jo B said...

It seems the wheel of time changes directions over the years, eh? Yet I still believe people are inherently good, that honesty will always be the right thing, and that the goodness in this world shines, even on those days when the cloudy actions of others seem to block time's light. Beautiful words and great wisdom, Rashmi.

Debby Rosenberg said...

amazing when I compare my youth (very similar to your expression) to that of today - it is like a different planet :)

http://atherialight.multiply.com/journal/item/101/Creative_Challenge_-_93_-_where_did_the_time_go_-_interesting

Tina Burton said...

Very nice.