When I stand before you
I see in you -
what I love
what I hate
the sensitivity
the numbness
my cruelty
my compassion
my tears
my laughter
a me that is young,
a me that is Old,
a me totally ignorant
a me relatively wise
Holding both within
A Scale, I am
Sometimes up
Sometimes down
I cherish them all
But Most cherished
Is those perfect moments
In complete Balance.
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21 comments:
Perfect moments in complete balance. Hmmm.... Yes, most cherished! :-)
wonderful!
Love this poem, well done Rashmi.
speechless
great write... =)
Just perfect
Rashmi balance is what the world strives for and it starts within us all. When we reflect, the picture becomes much clearer and then it is up to one and all to use this insight from reflection to place all things including ourselves back into BALANCE. I loved your take here.
very nice ^_^ i'd also like to use this for a wedding presentation. is it ok? tHaNks
Do you think it's a good idea to have an identical partner?
@ Gilesy - On some issues I do think its good to have a partner who is like you, for instance ethics, how we handle money, kids... but on other, No, we need to be different. I do think couples work well together in all aspects when both are willing to "give and take" and they complement each other. Its that Yin-Yang thing that works. I could be wrong, I am still learning after all.
I have rarely seen partners who are identical to each other. Most are Opposites, with different degrees of Differences.
Sure, go ahead, as long as you credit it. :)
Thank you Milli. :)
Thank you Pat .
@ Harleen, Thank you.
@ Sam, :) did think you would like it.
@Chris, Long time no see, glad to have you back.. thank you :)
@Tracy,Thank you
@ Shailji, You do know my definition for Perfection right?
I take it you standing infront of a mirror.
Very deep reflections.
Only our soul could see the truth in us.
Thank you for joining this week.
Deity
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This speaks to me of the "others are mirrors to us" concept I have heard so often... But Balance is also very important. Someday maybe I will achieve it..(smile)
http://vickiecollins.multiply.com/journal/item/613/Poetry_Posse_Reflections
Its a person. :).
Yep, you got it.
Lovely reflections. Very nice poem.
http://dianahopeless.multiply.com/journal/item/522/Reflections_of_Home_my_poem
Perfect reflection /:-)
Finding balance is finding that perfection or near perfection within the self that seems just short of the mark. For finding balance is not an overnight task, but something that takes years to rise to, but when the moment finds itself, along the way, it also finds the person and then all the unanswered questions have the answers as plain as a full moon on a clear night.
Nicely written. 8=)
http://danceinsilence.multiply.com/journal/item/783/PP_Declaration
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