Tuesday, January 22, 2008

Idea of You

Your Thoughts ripple,

In perfect harmony with mine.

The light in your eyes,

Giving me perfect warmth.

Your mind reaches out,

Sending a hum through mine.

Though distant, Feeling close,

I wish to hang on to the idea of you.

If I could, I would,

Like sleep hanging on to the dream.

How Sad a life we lead,

Dying with unquenched desires.

But should it be so,

May you live a little longer than I.

5 comments:

Shail Mohan said...

The same comment as always: "You speak for me' ! The thing is you express it, while my thoughts remain searching for appropriate words to express themselves. So I just have to come to your page sometimes and find my thoughts all laid out for me!! :-)

Giles Y Owen said...

True love.

Bc T said...

Beautiful indeed! Is it any person in particular you dedicated to. Seemed to me that the person in your poem is someone really close to you and you admire his/her idea

Larro AVA said...

I haven't written poetry in...more than a decade. I'll have to dig a good one out of my collection.

Larro AVA said...

It's a beautiful poem, btw.