They weave their fingers
Happy to be together
Both silently feeling
A lump of knot in their hearts.
The wedding takes place
Oh! People with knots
The Groom "I hope she's the one."
The Bride "Oh! I hope he's the one."
As the priest ties the Knot
The father has a knot in his heart
"My baby now a woman,
How soon time has flown."
The Mother has a knot in her heart
"Oh lord, I hope he makes her happy
Please keep her happy."
The friends have knots in their hearts
"What a lucky dog!" thinks one
"Hmm, if only I asked her first" thinks another
"I am so happy for them, I could cry" thinks the third
"God! why can't I find a guy like him?" thinks the fourth.
"Wonder when lunch will be served" thinks the fifth...
Many knots, in a tiny space.
Back and forth the tennis of knots,
The first night,
A room with knots
Knotted garlands, knotted hearts
Knotted expectations, to live up to.
A few weeks later,
Knots undone, as each befriends the other.
A Month later,
Knots of confrontation, their first argument
A few moments later
Knots undone, as each apologizes.
A few months later,
The wife is pregnant,
"Wow! there's a part of me she's holding", he thinks,
Every time he sees her glowing.
"Our baby", thinks the wife,
Smiling, as their heart ties a knot with this unseen being.
Life an undulation of knots
Most Cherished and adored
When its time to Go
Its these knots that count the most.
K P Rashmi April 2007
Tour The Creative Challenge #104
16 comments:
all tied up in knots is sometimes a good thing huh?
this is very sweet with a little humor that made it so enjoyable!
Excellent read, Rashmi
Creative Challenge #104 ~ THE KNOT(S)
Wonderful Chinese Knotting. Those two words means Joy. :)
http://awakingdreams.multiply.com/journal/item/88/Creative_Challenge_-_The_Knot
Ah so thats what they mean.. I looked at them and felt happy, so I borrowed the picture from the web its not my own...
Thank you, I learned something new :).
An enjoyable reading of a good writing with a pinch of humor...
http://belita747.multiply.com/journal/item/1018/CREATIVE_CHALLENGE_KNOT
Beautiful and very very moving.
http://vickiecollins.multiply.com/journal/item/1066/Creative_Challenge_A_Haiku_on_Knot
It's nice if things turn out that way. Sometimes the man doesn't see the knot as "part of me she's holding," which is sad.
So many knots Rashmi! :) I liked the knotted garlands, knotted hearts especially. :)
http://shailajamohan.multiply.com/journal/item/377/Creative_Challenge_104_-_Knot
Perfect Rashmi....a beautifully crafted write here.
Creative Challenge ~ 104 ~ Knot
Beautiful words. It is those knots in our hearts that are the important things, eh?
Like the way you weave a knot throughout your poem. Seems knots can be joyful and painful. I guess life is a balancing act between keeping them from untying and keeping them tied.
It is indeed a knotty life, but you have described it so well in these words.
http://tabbynera.multiply.com/journal/item/1406/Creative_Challenge_104_Knots
Thats truly beautiful knotting indeed .... symbolic ....
http://lynne4.multiply.com/journal/item/468/Creative_Challenge_Knot
awesome...
I'm a mixture of the third and fifth guests thoughts...lol
simply beautiful...i love it..
http://tinafranc.multiply.com/journal/item/326/Creative_Challenge104_KNOT
Wonderful; really touching.
http://msnuser.multiply.com/journal/item/357/Creative_Challenge_104_-_Knot
Life... woven together. Beautifully.
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