Friday, May 25, 2012

Creative challenge #205 - Empathy

An Event in 55 words.

“I am an empathetic person, I understand how others feel” He said.

We walked past a man dragging a woman by her hair.

I wanted to help so I stop to look,

“It’s a family matter, not our business”, he said pulling me away.

I understood him. We walked away with all of our empathy.

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6 comments:

Nony Anon said...

*winces* Ow. His empathy is sadly lacking, isn't it?

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Yes and So was mine wasnt it...if I understood him? of course, the I here was a generic one...

Nony Anon said...

"I wanted to help so I stop to look" - Your/Her empathy wasn't lacking - I took it that their relationship was domineering/abusive. In cases like that, discretion would be the better part of valor.

Pat Angloswiss said...

Sounds like something from caveman days - unfortunately there are still some cavemen amongst us.

Stormy Weather said...

Interesting. Robert Frost has a poem that talks about an incident in kind of the same way.

http://brycecoddnormal.multiply.com/journal/item/54/Creative_Challenge_205_-_Empathy

dp ♥ said...

empathy and lack there of, interesting what some profess to be and what they really are, then again empathy has many levels doesn't it?
thought provoking write...will ponder this for awhile LOL