Saturday, April 2, 2011

Fiction in a Flash #30 - I, Me and Mine

 

I realize, there is an "I" other than Me and Mine, as I look down in awe and respect for the body that held me. My attention is drawn to the most important part of this journey - My Feet. My friend, Thank you, for carrying me so far without complaining. Now, we part with joyful hearts.

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12 comments:

Nikhil P. said...

This is an unexpected story....yet I liked it.

http://nikhilpant.multiply.com/journal/item/665/Death_at_the_deli_Fiction_In_A_Flash_30_

Kae B said...

Very spiritual! I like it!

Crystal Dreamer said...

I liked this too. Giving thanks to your feet, now that you no longer need them, as you move away from your tactile body, in spirit form. very good.

Thellord Thighgod said...

*smile*

Lynne R said...

Oh that is brilliant .... excellent enterpretation ... never thought of looking at it that way!!

Mary Patricia said...

We need to be kind to our feet.I like this respect given to them even in spirit.
http://neuron66.multiply.com/journal/item/102/Fiction_in_a_flash.30_One_Foot_in_The_Grave

Kitty Konnection Purrrrfect said...

a different twist indeed....pretty cool!

FIAF #30~ Fizzled Fetish

Virginia ~ said...

Unexpected, but I like it!

purple tide said...

Excellent! :)

joyce cooper said...

okay...this one is creative..very creative thinking

Mythical Magpie said...

It's an interesting thought that the last thing someone might see as they depart this mortal coil is their own feet.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you! Nikhil, Bonny, Crystalinne, stuffedducky, lynne, Neuron, lady,Virginia, Shineon, Jakuper and Magpie...for visiting me and leaving thought prints.