Sunday, November 22, 2009

Writer's Block # 71 - Verse

The Love Nest

Nestled in mountains warm palms
Love's nest of Passions
Flows into secret waters.

Writer's Block Challenge #71

12 comments:

dp ♥ said...

mmm mmm mmm...yummy Haiku!

Jan Marius said...

Wonderful picture and Haiku!

Mindsnomad Yay said...

LOL Danette, Yes, its yummy...I seem to give out the Feel of Food :P

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you Marius. :). The picture is part of the challenge, only the words are mine.

Joe B. said...

Excellent metaphor. Sounds like an ideal getaway.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Oops in my hurry to post, I didnt realize I reversed the Haiku Rule of 5-7-5 to 7-5-7.. So going to remove the word Haiku from it. :) It works well as a verse.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

yes, the picture seems like an ideal getaway, wish I was younger to be that impulsive, though :).

Mickey ® said...

-Bravo-

Angel Smith said...

So does it rent by the day or the week? Lol! Nice job!

Mindsnomad Yay said...

haha, never asked, thought it was MINE for the taking :P

Scott . said...

I love this imagery....it feels secure and embracing

Mindsnomad Yay said...

You got what I was aiming for..that feeling of safe even when its a secret.:)