Monday, November 23, 2009

Love through Time?

In a time when love was
Talked, a whole lot less
Proved, a whole lot more
In timeless ways, of yore
We nestled in a light
Of wanton delight
Letting passion flow
As gentle as a doe.

Something changed
Broke the chain
Letting time pass on
Into the now, dawn.
In dreams you appear,
Through my fear
I Yearn your touch
Though it feels forbidden
To cross that invisible line
Between our nows.

If there was a Then
For you and I, when

We walked the now
What was it, we couldnt get past?
Why is there a hollow in my heart?
I cant seem to sort,
On nights the dream starts.

8 comments:

tracy marshall said...

Oh, this is lovely!

To cross that invisible line
Between our nows.

dp ♥ said...

poignant yet elegant at the same time...superb writing!

Milli Musings said...

Beautifully expressed Rashmi..what if things had been different?

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you Tracy, Danette, Carol..Its been a while since I wrote poetry that wasnt part of a challenge :P

Leveret 333 said...

Beautifully written... So smooth and flowing through those passages that otherwise might have felt rocky or awkward. I love that line...
" To cross that invisible line
Between our nows."

Another sensitive gem....:))

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you Jackie :)

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Now that would be a poem of a different nature ;). If it were, I dont know, its one of those mysteries of life..

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you Tracy, Danette and Jackie :)..