Thursday, November 19, 2009

Creative Challenge #79 - Turn Around

As you battled

Your conflicted mind

Your hands did rise

To hold my face

With a touch so tender

You did look

Deeper than my eyes

Yet, you left,

As I hoped

You would look back,

Just once,

Look back at me,

So I may read,

what you deny,

That feeling you run from,

That feeling I stay with,

For that is my world,

Theres no where else to go,

No place to be

No other to meet

Except You.

So I wait

Until you turn around.

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11 comments:

Leveret 333 said...

This is yummy.... Sorry that is the only word I can use to describe it ...LOL ... Just plain yummy ...I just have to go back for another nibble.

dp ♥ said...

very passionate write! I love it (not the waiting :p )
well done dear one!

Mindsnomad Yay said...

LOL Jackie, thinking of food, now I am hungry :P

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you Danette, felt good writing it :)

Bill Purkayastha said...

If he doesn't look round, you may have to face the fact that he isn't worth it; he may not deserve you.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Quite possible :)

Clare M said...

Overflowing with emotion.

Pat Angloswiss said...

Full of deep feelings

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you Clare and Pat :).

Nini Recio said...

written straight from the heart...hope he turns around soonest...

Debby Rosenberg said...

don't wait too long..:)