Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Hunkered

Heart heavy as grains in a Silo,
My voice, sunken to a new low,
Let me be in my alone-ness,
Do not show me kindness,
As I hunker from you,
Let me, in my sorrow wallow,
Like buffaloes in  muddy fallow,
As uplifting as your love is,
In hurt's wake, it leaves an abyss.

10 comments:

Milli Musings said...

Oh Rashmi
I can not console thee
For your pain
I am so sorry.
Hugs
Love from Milli.

Leveret 333 said...

I cannot leave thee sunken low,
It would grieve to see thee so.
Make right, sweet song of light.
Speak soft, find heart's delight.
Make haste, oh spirited song
For Rashmi waits, too long, too long.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

((hugs)) to you too.. and ty :).

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you Jackie.:). I enjoyed the verse. I do end up waiting too long and missing the train.

Shail Mohan said...

Rashmi, as usual you speak for me. Only thing you have done it in a much better way than I would have. I tried commenting at wordpress. But it wouldn't let me! :( Is the comment section closed to non-wordpressees??

BLINGKINGCAT ASTROPHIC said...

i'll be there when u want to come out for a cuddle.............hugs anyway whether you like it or not
Diana
xxx

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Shailji, When I read the Retreat I was thinking.."Oh my! same thoughts, just different words". Thank you. :)

Hmm... everyone are allowed to comment, I wonder if they were having some maintenence issues.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you! Diana.

Giles Y Owen said...

Oh dear, I am so sorry you had to write this.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

:) Its passed, things change and we survive..