Close your eyes
Ignore your Touch
Breathe in Steady
Stop the listening
From your depth
Sense your being
In complete truth.
Open your eyes
Feel your skin
Breathe in deep
Listen carefully
From your senses
See the Beauty
Surrounding you in Subtlety.
In the closing and opening
In the feeling and ignoring
In the steady and deep
In the listening and not listening
Sense our senses sharpening
The secret to our well being.
14 comments:
Beautiful...
Don't be afraid to get in touch with inner you...Your light comes from within! :-)
Wonderful /:-)
reads almost like the definition of Yoga
http://naarta.multiply.com/journal/item/835/POETRY_POSSE_47_SENSES
It is..The first part is one of the ways to meditate, sitting still.
a totally relaxing poem..and its only when we learn to meditate that we learn to use all our senses..great job
http://aslowread.multiply.com/journal/item/549/Blood_Sweat_or_Tears_Poem_Posse
To suit our internal reflexes
http://tabbynera.multiply.com/journal/item/1224/Poetry_Posse_-_Week_47_Sensual_Poetry
my thought ... a continual mantra. Constant repitition of a set of verses to join mind and soul as one. I like it!
Here I be ...
http://danceinsilence.multiply.com/journal/item/1325/PP_-_From_The_Mancave_-_The_Senses_Speak_For_Us
Honestly, while reading your entry, I remember my yoga instructor. For a momen there, I feel renewed.
Thanks for playing this week.
~ Mj
I enjoyed your poem so much Rashmi it was refreshing..
It did what I intended then. When I read the word senses, the feeling of how we feel after a Yoga session is what came to mind and I thought that really is an awakening of senses. Thank you for Hosting. :)
It did what I intended then. When I read the word senses, the feeling of how we feel after a Yoga session is what came to mind and I thought that really is an awakening of senses. Thank you for Hosting. :)
OMG...BOW! This is wonderful!! I think you tapped something etherworldly, there... Thank you for sharing!
It's good to get in touch with oneself, this has a mesmerizing and subtle beat to it! I read it a couple of times, it almost could be a mantra! Great, creative write!
http://sylvie1.multiply.com/journal/item/885/POETRY_POSSE_..._WEEK_47_..._SENSES
This could very easily be a pray you could pray when faced with a touch situation or decision. I LOVE it!
http://bostonsdandd.multiply.com/journal/item/350
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