Thursday, September 10, 2009

Creative Challenge 69: Autumn

I

In Love's warm embrace
Under the naked forest
Listen to leaves breathe.

II

Along the green's edge
Scurrying squirrels dig holes
Safely Storing nuts.

III

Proud farmers look on
At golden patches of earth
Abundant harvest.

Creative Challenge 69, Tour Here

11 comments:

Jan Marius said...

Absolutely wonderful! Great pic too!

http://janmarius.multiply.com/journal/item/30/Creative_Challenge_69_-_Autumn_Shadow

CJ (Jene') said...

Love it all but especially 'listen to leaves breathe'. Wonderful!

belita 747 said...

Beautiful write... the first three lines are my favorite!
Thanks for the visit.

Leveret 333 said...

yummy Haiku, MIssy...specially that first one... only when the mind is quiet can one " listen to the leaves breathe" ....You certainly do have a talent for phrasing. Most enjoyable.

Tina Burton said...

I really like this Rashmi. :)

dp ♥ said...

lovely haiku(s), all very soothing and fitting for an autumn theme!
I think the first one will be my favorite for today *smiles*

Jo B said...

Your poem literally made me sigh and say, "AH!".

Heather B said...

could see them doing all this full of expression!

Cherie ... said...

True images of Autumn painted with words. Well done.

Sylvie -------- said...

wonderful images of autumn!

http://sylvie1.multiply.com/journal/item/888/CC_69_..._AUTUMN

Tori Bri said...

how rich on colors..