Thoughts gallop like Wild Horses
Kicking up dust across the plains
Clouding my Mind
With doubts and fears
Unleashing chaos supreme.
In despair I stand,
At the fork on the road
Until Prana*, soothes each
With its quiet Power
Reigning them In.
The Light breaks out,
Wiping Darkness Away.
I Stand Tall, breathing deep
As my soul smiles
In Bliss.
*Prana is the Hindu equivalent of Chinese Qi and the Japanese Chi - the life force, usually present and controlled through our Breath.
15 comments:
Whoa!!!!!! Powerful poetry, Rashmi! Wonderful words picture to the image!
Beautiful Rashmi, very powerful with meaning.
Yes Rashmi...it is beautiful. I haven't done this in ages. I must get back to it. Maybe when Winter arrives I shall have more time.
beautiful
Another wonderful piece ..... I am jealous I wasn't a part of this wonderful word adventure.
Wow What a great and powerful poem Rashmi. I like it very much. Thank you for sharing. You have already visited and commented mine at - http://jayaramanms.multiply.com/journal/item/248/248
Beautiful, Rashmi.
Vivid, thoughtful words to the theme. Very nice.
Fascinating the comparison of the thoughts with the wild horses
Beautiful, and very expressive - thank you
http://hedgewitch9.multiply.com/journal/item/108/PTW_-_Movement1_-_Atai_continued
great poem
http://vickiecollins.multiply.com/journal/item/429/pictures_to_words--movement-week1
I can relate with that, wish I can be like those horses who just don't care where they're heading.
Lovely poem....
Not A Human Life
Vivid images, great analogy and beautiful writing, Rashmi! Just when I thought an idea was shaping, I read yours and am humbled. Thank you for sharing this.
Very contemplative words. Very well put. Very well done!
Pinkie
Lovely and so well written!
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