As I unwind
Under closed eyes
Going over the days events
Like a tape on rewind
I see you lurking
In every frame
My soul’s witness
For the day’s happening
Your loving eyes, graceful smiles
Hold me in my
Waking
Working
Resting
Sleeping
Dreaming hours
There wasn’t a time
You weren’t on my mind.
© K P Rashmi – July 2010
Tour Creative Challenge #110
17 comments:
Ah, Rashmi, what a beautiful and telling phrase. True love.
Thank you Jo... just got back from your's.
Beautiful!!
Oh that is beautiful ..... too lovely!!
oh this is so full of romantic loveliness, every line flowing well into the next, well scribed Rashmi!
True love, lovely expressed.
beautifully presented.
expressed love has no boundaries!
thanks for visiting mine
Splendid Rashmi..much love expressed here.
Creative Challenge 110 ~ On My Mind
That's true and deep love...
http://belita747.multiply.com/journal/item/1071/CREATIVE_CHALLENGE_ON_HER_MIND
Thank you Tracy, Lynne, Danette, Virginia, Callie, Carol and Belita... This was written quickly without much thought, it being summer vacation and me being on Call all the time :P.
Very nice!
I love this expression; we know it must be true love.
to be so watched over....:)
http://vickiecollins.multiply.com/journal/item/1125/Creative_Challenge_on_my_mind_2_poems_one_a_haiku_the_other_not
Really nice.
http://nikhilpant.multiply.com/journal/item/436/Value_system_-_Will_you_compromise_Creative_Challenge_110
Nice to still be able to have such thoughts.
So I can get back:
http://creativechallenge.multiply.com/journal/item/130/Creative_Challenge_110
"my soul's witness" so very spiritual!
...such beautiful writing!
Lovely
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