Sunday, January 24, 2010

Writer's Block # 76

The photo was taken by Danette our wonderful host for this challenge

Lighthouse Rhyme-time

 

My heart, I wholly gave

Unwittingly, to a knave

We rode the beautiful wave

Living in our legendary cave

Darkness within, I couldn’t stave

My mind, hoarse from insane rave

You shone the light, I did crave

Trusting that you would save

Me, from my untimely grave.

Tour the Writer's Block #76

7 comments:

Jo B said...

Wow, Rashmi, different from your usual style. I like it. Powerful. Energetic.

tracy marshall said...

love it!

Angel Branham said...

Interesting. I like the repetition of the same sound at the end of each line.

dp ♥ said...

very clever rhyming!

harleen gandhi said...

i like the rhyming!

Leveret 333 said...

Fun !!!

Tina Burton said...

I love this!