Sight
One Glance at sunrise
The heavenly moment Stayed
For ever Summer.
Hearing
Love whispers through mist
The Heart empties its winter
Snows melt, rivers flow.
Smell
Faint hints of a whiff
The scent of your loving soul
Spring springs in Eden.
Taste
Locked lips gently taste
Summers forbidden sweetness
Leaving stamped tongue-prints.
Touch
Fingers and palms meet
Shivers drench wholly my being
Hope awakes within.
8 comments:
mmmm... You bring newness to the senses ..."The heart empties its Winter ",,,great line.
i love your poetry more than anyone else... amazing!!!
Wow Rashmi! These are simply wow!! I loved 'hearing' the most. But no.. I like all of them equally I think!
I so enjoyed your poetry here Rashmi...so deep and so touching that..it lingers...
mmmm I love what your senses have experienced! great imagery...
You changed the second line in Hearing...sniffle sniffle....
Yes, I did, after I realized, it didnt follow the Haiku format of 5, 7, 5 syllables :P then I read it again and thought, heck I must have been sleepy and lost count so put it back now. *giggling*
Wonderful Rashmi. Love the sensitivity of it.
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