Monday, October 12, 2009

Creative Challenge #73- Happiest days of my life.

Head sinks into the inviting soft pillow
The days work done to our best ability,
Happiness sighs into the quiet night.

Buttons pushed in provocation
Headstrong remained civility

Happiness smiles at discipline.

Loud voices shout out in anger
One remains soft and gentle
Happiness alive in patience.

Unexpected jewels along the way
A compliment, kindness, belly laughs
Happiness spills around.

Honesty in all that is done
Eyes meet and smile at the mirror.
Happiness arrives with Intergrity.

Happiest days are those
When nothing is posed
When we are genuinely alive.

More At Creative Challenge # 73

10 comments:

dp ♥ said...

I love the mystery interlaced in this, I have a feeling there is a lot more to this than we could ever read between the lines...unexpected jewels make the ordinary day splendid!
awesome writing Rashmi!

Milli Musings said...

As Danette said Rashmi 'Awesome writing'.
The trick is, in living every moment genuinely alive..well done.

Jo B said...

Wow, Rashmi, this is spectacular and full of wisdom! I love that line near the end about how "Happiness arrives with integrity." This is my favorite poem of yours thus far, and you have written some fine ones!

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you Milli. That is the truth..:)

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thank you Jo.. I liked that particular verse more than others too.

Leveret 333 said...

Oh My ! ... This has the "Wow" factor ....makes the mind whirl at how determination to be happy can override the threats of being a victim...with grace.

Tina Burton said...

A compliment, kindness, belly laughs

That would be me and my kids. :)

Pat Angloswiss said...

There is so much truth in this verse, it is overwhelming. The last verse says all.

Kitty Konnection Purrrrfect said...

there are times that our creativity in writing is nothing less than brilliant.......this, Rashmi was one of those times for you!

Mysty Fairy~dragons said...

That last line sums everything up so perfectly... and truthfully