Tossing and Turning
Restlessly in the dark.
Viewing and reviewing
Our completeness.
Doubt, An incessant veil
On the path to being
- a child
- a friend
- a sibling
- an adult
- a lover
- a spouse
- a parent
- an elder
In the light of Truth
We unveil ourselves
Beholding our Being
Just before Dawn.
---K P Rashmi June 2009.
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26 comments:
I love it, a time to reflect....
i love the flowers inyour page....very alive and colorful...
http://tinafranc.multiply.com/journal/item/276/Creative_Challenge54_Just_Before_Dawn
gorgeous and the picture also...love this line "In the light of Truth"http://atherialight.multiply.com/journal/item/43/Creative_Challenge_-_55_just_before_dawn_
Ohhhhh...so right... Always that moment we hesitate, reflecting on who we are....Lovely ...
Seems your "blankness" left! I have a feeling if we lived close by we would be very good friends!
I love this!...beholding our being...brilliant line
I love your background too!
Love this writing... that line 'in the light of Truth' is so meaningful!!!
http://belita747.multiply.com/journal/item/680/CREATIVE_CHALLENGE_JUST_BEFORE_DAWN
:) thank you.. The flowers in the background are from my planter- a type of daisy - Tidy Tips.
:) Thank you. Debby and welcome to my home in the cybermist.
:), sometimes its really illogical to hesitate, yet we do...
:) thank you.. The flowers in the background are from my planter- a type of daisy - Tidy Tips.
wonderful interpretation.
http://sail2day2.multiply.com/journal/item/190/CC_55_Just_before_the_dawn
I hope blankness is done... I think so too. Thank you.:)
Thank you Belita and Tom :).
The restless dark and the light of truth. Great comparisons.
GREAT^^
http://emosux94.multiply.com/journal/item/13/CREATIVE_CHALLENGE-JUST_BEFORE_DAWNtheme
You know me too well, sis..
Beautiful writing, deep and true...
Great description of early morning soul searching.
THIS HAS A LOT OF THOUGHT, SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. i ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM.
http://sylvie1.multiply.com/journal/item/827/CC_55_JUST_BEFORE_DAWN
very very very deep love it
If this gets double posted, I apologize :o(. My Internet is being wacky today :os.
"We unveil ourselves." How I wish to know what this feels like. We get so comfortable behind the masks we show the world that it's hard for anyone to see the real us.
BEAUTIFUL poem! Took my breath away.
http://bostonsdandd.multiply.com/journal/item/313
Fantastic: together and yet separate.
beautiful piece
I love the picture that goes along with it...is that Venus in the upper right corner?
As an early riser I recognise most of this.
http://dockbillin.multiply.com/journal/item/1592/Just_Before_Dawn
That was the moon just beginning to fade.
Oh I like this, very good contemplation in the wee hours of the morning
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