People with warmth that bind,
Nights bring clarity to my mind,
Stars shine, as I hold them
Feeling blessed for this Life
Theres nothing more to ask for,
Yet, I pace within a void
For that grand something
What it is, I know not
Not Knowing, I cant ask for it
In this vast space where
Smiles dont reach its depth
Tears are never wept
I pace,
pace
and pace
Within this vast space
All the While
Sitting calmly in quietitude.
Thursday, April 15, 2010
Creative Challenge #97 - Restless
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17 comments:
oh I know this feeling, constantly looking for the missing piece of the puzzle
well scribed my friend!
Thank you Danette. :).
LOvely, Ward!! Love the conclusion and the staggered Pacing....
Now if only i could get you to write a romantic confession next Friday.....
Restless energy i have too much of and i don't think i couldv'e conveyed it better than you did here!!
Well done!
and hey, love ur new page!!! :)
perhaps to always be elusive because it is yet to happen....and when it does the next mystery lies in wait
wonderfully descriptive of restless
http://ladycallie.multiply.com/journal/item/1294?mark_read=ladycallie:journal:1294&replies_read=9
Howdy, Rashmi...man, your words so describe that period that precedes sort sort of change(s) in my life. Makes perfect sense to me!
wonderful imagery :)
Beautifully expressed ... the air of restlessness within a calm ....
Love this description of restless!
http://belita747.multiply.com/journal/item/962/CREATIVE_CHALLENGE_RESTLESS
This is a sense of restlessness that eludes me. Loved your description.
http://eyej.multiply.com/journal/item/6/restless_?replies_read=9
Do you have insomnia as well?
No, I dont but there is that once in a while when I cant sleep cause there are too many things that my mind goes over.
Thank you Callie, Jo, cinnamon, lynne, belita, ij for dropping by, reading and leaving thought prints... :)
Ooo..nice, I like it.
Sitting inthe calm quietude and pacing! How well I know that. Good one Rashmi.
And also the 'Not knowing, I can't ask for it'!! :)
http://shailajamohan.multiply.com/journal/item/366/Creative_Challenge_97_Restless
I pace,
pace
and pace
Lovely...
http://777edo.multiply.com/journal/item/18/Creative_Challenge_-_Restless
Your philosophies are refreshing to me. I'm off to read more.
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