Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Creative Challenge #49 : Rays of Sunlight

 

Their baby girl
Her father’s pearl
The first child in the clan
Wasn’t according to plan
The mother wished -
May she bring warmth
On Life's stone cold path
They named her - “Rays of sunlight”
Rashmi.

6 comments:

Baby Tiger said...

Wow, it sounds like a haiku!

Giles Y Owen said...

A glint in her father's eye.

Tina Burton said...

Pretty! Hi Rashmi, stopping in to say hi and hope you are doing well.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

It broke all the rules for haiku.. :)

Mindsnomad Yay said...

True at times...Although looking back, I think I could have done better.. The noisy could'ves, should'ves and would'ves.

Mindsnomad Yay said...

Thanks for dropping by Tina. I am well, just waiting on my muse's return.